What you've writ has a right nice taste and texture to it--a very fine stew of a story, with the voices of the beloveds just right. Thanks.
I really can only say "Wow" to this. The lonliness and angst blended with the sensual to the point of being painful. And the both of them purposely moving around the person in their thoughts and how will that affect both of their relationships with Theo? Nice.